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#1 - Posted 23 April 2009, 2:31 PM
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Write A Poem Today.


This is where you can express yourself with your poems. Let us see that other side people.

Those Lips I Crave.
by Will "AfroLatino" Rosenberg.

Let I be the one and only
In desire of you so lonely
Pleading in sound of reed
Willing to slowly die of your kiss.
Farther our love may reach this rope,
Yet I have loved you without hope.
As such, in grace this passion could only melt
What of hands this lover has never once dealt...

Those lips I crave

Please do not take or make
Selfishly of those lips away and sway...
Away from my dream,
Sway of my scream.
As of them are all I have known,
Clearly of our memories forsworn.
Once of those lips are my tasty sweet rhum.
Did so pleasurably mislead me to morn

For those lips I crave.




Edited on 4/24/2009 11:06 AM by AfroLatino.
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#2 - Posted 24 April 2009, 10:54 AM
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RE: Write A Poem Today.

Today, I hope to see some poems. It could be any poems whatsoever, but at the same time I hope they will be of good tastes. For once, let us discuss some poems and express some thoughts through the skills of poetry. Can we even do that? Do we possess such ability and capability on here?
Edited on 4/24/2009 10:56 AM by AfroLatino.
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#3 - Posted 24 April 2009, 11:05 AM
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THE CHALLENGE IS: YOU ARE INVITED TO WRITE SOMETHING POETIC IF YOU CAN !
Edited on 4/24/2009 11:13 AM by AfroLatino.
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#4 - Posted 24 April 2009, 11:15 AM
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RE: Write A Poem Today.
Wil my friend here is a haiku just for you


endless battles fought
copious words for all
they must see the light!
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#5 - Posted 24 April 2009, 11:17 AM
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RE: Write A Poem Today. - To A. J. Love L.M.
One Fond Kiss And Then We Sever

One fond kiss, and then we sever!
One farewell, and then forever!
Deep in heart-wrung tears I'll pledge thee,
Warring sights and groans I'll wage thee.

Who shall we say that Fortune grieves her
While the stars of Hope he leaves her?
Me, no cheerful twinkle lights me;
Dark despair around benights me.

Had we never loved so kindly,
Had we never loved so blindly,
Never met or never parted,
We had ne'er been broken-hearted.

Fare thee well, thou first and fairest!
Fare thee well, thou best and dearest!
Thine be every joy and treasure,
Peace, enjoyment, love and pleasure!

One found kiss, and then we sever! One farewell, alas, for ever!
Deep in heart-wrung tears I'll pledge thee,
Warring sighs and groans I'll wage thee.
Edited on 4/24/2009 11:21 AM by DominicanLady.
For everything you have missed, you have gained something else, and for everything you gain, you lose something else.
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#6 - Posted 24 April 2009, 11:32 AM
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RE: Write A Poem Today. - To A. J. Love L.M.
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DominicanLady previously said:

One Fond Kiss And Then We Sever

One fond kiss, and then we sever!
One farewell, and then forever!
Deep in heart-wrung tears I'll pledge thee,
Warring sights and groans I'll wage thee.

Who shall we say that Fortune grieves her
While the stars of Hope he leaves her?
Me, no cheerful twinkle lights me;
Dark despair around benights me.

Had we never loved so kindly,
Had we never loved so blindly,
Never met or never parted,
We had ne'er been broken-hearted.

Fare thee well, thou first and fairest!
Fare thee well, thou best and dearest!
Thine be every joy and treasure,
Peace, enjoyment, love and pleasure!

One found kiss, and then we sever! One farewell, alas, for ever!
Deep in heart-wrung tears I'll pledge thee,
Warring sighs and groans I'll wage thee.



Wow, between the words of fond kiss severed of the lips craved, we possibly might have just one hell of a making out session. Would you not say (lol)? I love this poem!
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#7 - Posted 24 April 2009, 11:35 AM
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RE: Write A Poem Today.
Forty Nine Years
One night's dream
A lifetime of prosperity
A cup of sake

Uesugi Kenshin (1530-1578)
“Since the two rarely come together, anyone compelled to choose will find greater security in being feared than in being loved.” Niccolo Machiavelli
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#8 - Posted 24 April 2009, 11:37 AM
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RE: Write A Poem Today. - To A. J. Love L.M.
So do I! You have been like a therapy section for me! (First the music, and now the poems..)

Thanks Will!


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#9 - Posted 24 April 2009, 11:41 AM
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Lautaro previously said:

Forty Nine Years
One night's dream
A lifetime of prosperity
A cup of sake

Uesugi Kenshin (1530-1578)



Oh hey Laut, have you ever actually had 'Sake"? Hot or Cold? Well I am a sushi fanatic and by the way, great poetic quote!
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#10 - Posted 24 April 2009, 11:44 AM
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Quote:
Lautaro previously said:

Forty Nine Years
One night's dream
A lifetime of prosperity
A cup of sake

Uesugi Kenshin (1530-1578)



Oh hey Laut, have you ever actually had 'Sake"? Hot or Cold? Well I am a sushi fanatic and by the way, great poetic quote!


Yes, I rather like it cold. Unfortunately, it's not a beverage that everyone can drink. It's so strong that it makes vodka and tequila look like agua de coco in comparison.
“Since the two rarely come together, anyone compelled to choose will find greater security in being feared than in being loved.” Niccolo Machiavelli
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