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#41 - Posted 28 April 2009, 5:12 PM
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RE: Write A Poem Today.
It Still s here.
By Will "AfroLatino" Rosenberg.

Just as once I loved you;
Either since or still.
My mind is just as troubled
And feel much like the warning
Of what I felt would happen now today
Yet was afraid always that somehow
Our effort were bound to its eventuality

My trust no longer speak aloud
As such glass shattered old
Made shy my optimism
A kind of innocence stolen.
Your arms were my Eden, really.
What says yes, surely, you were my Eve.
Eternity, I swear, seemed sincerely promising

As misfortune were to interfere,
My heart have found to live
Among hardest of rocks
Just as part of rigid gravels
Used to all episodes of hurt.
Unfree, unmended and as mingled saddly in regards
Of you what has once been its only glory and delight.

I, now, still can not h8te nor love you...
Yet somewhat a mind swimming in great reminisce
Entirely tuned with ours alone, the memories.
Those that were in hope to be made today
Compared with those that never had their chances.
My sentiments are left standing effused
As this vortex never closed from your realm.

So it is just as obvious, Angel... Love still s here.
Edited on 4/28/2009 5:14 PM by AfroLatino.
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#42 - Posted 28 April 2009, 6:27 PM
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RE: Write A Poem Today.
Por ti
mi amor
con este punal de acero
me decorazonaria yo.

Doesn't rhymes for shit but it's an old Dominican (I think) saying.

Like I previously told you, Afro, I can't write a poem even if my life depended on it, even if Joan Manuel Serrat is one of my favorite singers/poets. (Actually, he is a singer who happens to write poems for songs).



Edited on 4/28/2009 6:30 PM by TuPapaupa.
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#43 - Posted 28 April 2009, 9:13 PM
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RE: Write A Poem Today.
The Magic Of Love

Love is like magic
And it always will be.
For love still remains
Life's sweet mystery!!
Love works in ways
That are wondrous and strange
And there's nothing in life
That love cannot change!!
Love can transform
The most commonplace
Into beauty and splendor
And sweetness and grace.
Love is unselfish,
Understanding and kind,
For it sees with its heart
And not with its mind!!
Love is the answer
That everyone seeks...
Love is the language,
That every heart speaks.
Love can't be bought,
It is priceless and free,
Love, like pure magic,
Is life's sweet mystery!!

- Helen Steiner Rice –

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#44 - Posted 28 April 2009, 9:54 PM
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RE: Write A Poem Today.
Love is so very special
Yet can make you feel so lost
It can arrive just like the springtime
And melt away like morning frost

You must find ways to nurture
Always grow your love with care
Never ever take for granted
The love that you both share

Mistakes are bound to happen
You may hurt each other's heart
Yet don't give up to easily
It will tear your love apart

Love resembles a bright flame
That lights a dark starry night
Never ever let this flame burn down
Rekindle with all your might

Take a moment every day
Look deep into each other's eyes
Never hesitate to show affection
Small gestures will keep a love alive

Talk openly about your feelings
Take time to show that you care
Treasure each and every moment
Because to find true love is rare

- Connie Thomas Lugo -
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